Thursday, August 12, 2010

Preliminary Layouts

Obviously, the rivulets atop the letters will go all the
way to the water at the top. I still have to figure out
why it looks crooked despite a myriad of
grids and rulings proclaiming it straight.



EDIT: Si. Is mo'betta.

Is exceptionally mo'betta.

4 comments:

  1. You have darker colors on the text and stone (slightly)on the left which causes the slightly crooked look. Though the weight in the text (and also the three taller letters at left) may be causing the stone to look a bit darker there. Reversing the background so that the dark green area is behind the room part should balance it out.

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  2. You were correct, sir! I never tire of having clever friends.

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  3. Oh excellent! I do so love your lettering.

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  4. Awesome. Maybe next time one of them can come along and help rather than me. See, there's one now.

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